Hari omNeat! YAM xx
Very well done...perhaps a new minimalist style there in you.
Do you think it is working? Thanks for the encouragement!
When less certainly is more!
It is being fun to see what can be said in the least number of words.
Very good !
Thanks, Nicole. It is fun to pack a lot into a little.
Santoka Taneda is inspiring you. A nice free-style haiku in Santoka Taneda's style of haiku-ing.
Kristjaan, thank you so much for your kind words. Janice