seed

Carpe Diem #1120 Seed

bury
spread ... stretch
grow
with love's
warmth

©  petra domina



Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on 

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI

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  2. Love's warmth can be therapeutic! Yes, Janice!

    Hank

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  3. Very nice
    .minimalist...however...this is a haiku for me..I think two full lines of conclusion would elevate your thought you were expressing, or take further..

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    1. I am experimenting with the fewest words possible. I need to see if better vocabulary could expand the thought. Always appreciate your guidance, Hamish!

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  4. Very nice
    .minimalist...however...this is a haiku for me..I think two full lines of conclusion would elevate your thought you were expressing, or take further..

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  5. I coudl just picture a seed - that is so sweet!

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  6. A nice "minimal" tanka, a bit like Santoka Taneda, who was a haiku poet of the so called "free-style"

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    1. An experiment on what can be done with the fewest words. thanks for stopping by!

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