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Love's warmth can be therapeutic! Yes, Janice!Hank
Yes, it can be. Janice
compact and concise :)
Trying that as a style for a time.
Very nice.minimalist...however...this is a haiku for me..I think two full lines of conclusion would elevate your thought you were expressing, or take further..
I am experimenting with the fewest words possible. I need to see if better vocabulary could expand the thought. Always appreciate your guidance, Hamish!
Simplistic and beautiful!
Thank you, Dolores!
I coudl just picture a seed - that is so sweet!
You can feel the growth in this. Lovely, Janice.
A nice "minimal" tanka, a bit like Santoka Taneda, who was a haiku poet of the so called "free-style"
An experiment on what can be done with the fewest words. thanks for stopping by!