Thursday, November 3, 2016

through the mist

Carpe Diem Tanka Splendor #2 Mist


muffled sounds
filtering through 
the morning mist
a golden willow
weeps

©  petra domina

©  petra domina 2016

Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on 

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI

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    1. If I change voices in the first line that would make it more about love...... I will get this yet.

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    2. I like the ambiguity of the first line, Janice - those muffled sounds could be lovers!

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    3. Well, it could be. This hidden love poem is tricky! Thanks for stopping by and commenting.

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