South Padre Island

South Padre Island

Friday, November 4, 2016

low sunlight

Carpe Diem Tanka Splendor #5 low sunlight


silloutted
against the evening sky
a single pillar
casts its long shadow
across the waiting valley 

©  petra domina



in the low sunlight
longing eyes softly touching
from across the room
heartbeats hastening
old lovers' tryst

©  petra domina

Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on 

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI

11 comments:

  1. Awesome set of tanka Janice. I like them both very much, but inyour second I read true love.

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    1. The first was just raw passion it seems. And I was thinking of my sweet husband in the second. Thank you for taking time to visit and leaving your encouraging comments.

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  2. Wonderful, romantic tanka, Janice!

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