Saturday, November 5, 2016

dancing in the moonlight

Carpe Diem "Make The Haiku Complete" (100) encore, just for fun. "dancing in the moonlight"


fireflies
dancing in the moonlight
sky write a message

©  petra domina


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15 comments:

  1. Nicely done! I was thinking of fireflies too but couldn't come up with a third line.

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  2. A beautiful concept and idea. Should it be 'writes'?

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    1. I struggled with that. With fireflies plural, writes would be singular verb therefore not agreeing with the noun. I actually had the fireflies as singular (firefly) at first which would make writes the proper verb for noun/verb agreement.

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  3. A beautiful concept and idea. Should it be 'writes'?

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  4. I love this haiku, you have completed it in a nice way.

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  5. I was going to write one with fireflies and changed my mind - glad I did - yours is lovely!

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