Nicely done! I was thinking of fireflies too but couldn't come up with a third line.
The lines were a while coming.
Hari OM... so prettily too! YAM xx
Thank you, friend. janice xx
A beautiful concept and idea. Should it be 'writes'?
I struggled with that. With fireflies plural, writes would be singular verb therefore not agreeing with the noun. I actually had the fireflies as singular (firefly) at first which would make writes the proper verb for noun/verb agreement.
Thank you Helene.
I love this haiku, you have completed it in a nice way.
High praise, my master.
I was going to write one with fireflies and changed my mind - glad I did - yours is lovely!
Your comment makes me blush.
Oh yes!! such a stunning completion!!
Thank you Cheryl-Lynn