Tuesday, November 1, 2016

colored leaves

Carpe Diem Tanka Splendor #1 Teika's first of Ten Tanka Writing Techniques "Mystery and Depth"


movement beneath 
the colored leaves shed
from above
new skin
the color of leaves

©  petra domina

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CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI




9 comments:

  1. new skin the colour of leaves... lovely thought.

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  2. Hari OM
    ...caterpillar??? Love the coloured leaves shed... YAM xx

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  3. Beautifully crafted tanka Janice. Chapeau!

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    1. I love the contrast of the 'movement beneath' and 'from above' to convey the 'new skin' of teh coloured leaves. Nice one, Janice!

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