South Padre Island

South Padre Island

Thursday, November 3, 2016

bare branches

Carpe Diem Tanka Splendor #4 Teika's 2nd Tanka Writing Technique "Appropriate statement" - prompt: bare branches


scampering
along the bare branches
with a tail raised
gathers acorns in his jaws
fills a hole with his seed

©  petra domina

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10 comments:

  1. thats truly flowing with the vivid imagery !

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  2. Do many squirrels here, each with their own character. Really fun little creatures.

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    1. Yes they are. The question is did you get the hidden meaning that could be a love message? Or did I miss the mark again?

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  3. Wow Janice what a beautiful tanka. This scene is almost visible in front of my eyes. Great.

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    1. As I responded to Hamish, I missed the romantic poem.

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