Mmm beautiful, and powerful in the reading. The concept has made you produce one of your finest: simple, yet with such depth, and for me real poetic imagery. So nice.
Been working on it for several days before I saw the path prompt. It sprouted from an observation I made to my husband about how far it seemed the first time we went to a certain location but how close it seemed now. I told him there is a haiku in that.
Reminiscent of Robert Frost!
Oh, my. Never thought of that.
Hari OM...and writing poetry of any kind is like that; seems to take forever and then, in a flash, it's there! A delight to wander with you "Petra"! YAM xx
Good Evening, YAMA delight to have you along on the journey! janice xx
interesting in its argument of known and unknown; its like the returning along the journey travelled the psychology of shortened timePaloma thank you for dropping in at my Sunday Lime todaymuch love...
Thanks, Gillena.My son points out how long it was between Christmases for a five year old since it was 20% of their life. Then at 50, only 2%.
A very nice result Janice. I really like this:)
New paths to explore ... nicely written.
Thank you for stopping by, Kristjaan.
Perfect! And that's a great observation.
Just something we noticed as we passed a football field one evening.