behind drawn curtains
from the shade tree
fly, fly, fly . .
© petra domina
Well, that has been rewritten about 15 times. Words can be changed so it is not solid. What do you think? What feeling, vision, taste, etc came to mind as you read the tanka? I am looking to my Kai to help me improve. Thanks to each of you. Sending good thoughts into the universe for sweet Jane who shared so freely.
Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on