Wednesday, July 6, 2016

with bare feet

Carpe Diem Tokubetsudesu #86 Back In Time "Only The First Line"

- - - - challenge text - - - -
Here is the first line you have to use to create a new haiku or tanka. This line is extracted from a haiku written by myself.

"with bare feet"

And here is the haiku, inspired on a quote by Khalil Gibran, from which I extracted this first line:

with bare feet
dancing on Mother Earth's grounds
wind plays with my hair

© Chèvrefeuille

- - - - my response - - - -

with bare feet
she strokes his leg
in love
savoring
life

© petra domina

Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on 

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI

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