Nice contrast here, also first line goes so smoothly, second one - brings the surprising revelation for readers ~ very cool!
Thank you, nothing like a little surprise ending!
Oh, I love this "river mouth"...I wanted to bring in a river but did not how to word it...you did it so beautifully, my dear!
I cheated, as usual. Went on line and read about bay activity in spring time. And there is where the river mouth came to mind.
That's not cheating Janice, it's excellent research! I too rather enjoyed this a lot!
Ok, so it is learning and allowing other input! Glad you rather enjoyed this one .. a lot!
I agree with Humbird's thoughts on this..very well done Janice:)
I was not even thinking of it as a surprise ending, just writing about Nature's events. Thanks for the kind comment.
Excellent continuation Janice