Monday, May 9, 2016

autumn leaves

Carpe Diem Tan Renga Challenge Month May 9th "autumn leaves turn red" by Georgia (a.k.a. Bastet)



autumn leaves turn red


Here is her haiku which will be our "hokku" (starting verse) of today's Tan Renga Challenge:


a dream in a dream
sand slipping through old fingers
autumn leaves turn red


 © Georgia

lost deep in the forest of
confused reality . .

©  Janice 'petra domina' Adcock


Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on 

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI


6 comments:

  1. Reality can be testing sometimes. Nice tanka Janice!

    Hank

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    1. Thank you, Hank. Hope to start getting to visit other blogs. Still catching up on posts!!!!

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  2. Hari OM
    OH my... you hit that one head on Janice... perfect. YAM xx

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    1. Bless You, Yam. Thanks for your generous comment. janice, xx

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  3. Lost in reality? That must be sad, reality sometimes is a riddle and a mystery. Nicely written second stanza, with a deeper meaning. Thank You Janice.

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    1. My last living aunt is slipping into the confused reality. She was a huge influence in my life and was on my mind and heart as I read Georgia's beautiful haiku. Thank you for visiting.

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