Friday, March 11, 2016

forest

Carpe Diem #936 Forest


Paradox ... In haiku


black forest
whatever you may say
a morning of snow


© Basho (Tr. Jane Reichhold)

waiting room
a patch of sunlight
wears out the chairs
© Jane Reichhold

free falling rain
gathers on the fence
holding tight

©  Janice 'petra domina' Adcock


Thanks to Chèvrefeuille for daily prompts on 

CARPE DIEM HAIKU KAI


10 comments:

  1. Hari OM
    ...and reflects the light! Lovely rendition! YAM xx

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  2. You got it! I think your haiku really changed and evolved my friend - and specifically I feel you have more feel for what you want from your haiku, and the consistency is therefore there. Always a treat coming to your page.

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    1. You and kai have taught me so much over the period of time since I stumbled across the site 18 or so months ago. Glad you visit. I will be leaving in 9 days for the river cruise. Will be looking for inspiration. Probably will not be posting much once se leave till sometime in April.

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  4. I like those raindrops holding tight to the fence ! nice imagery

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    1. Pl have a look at my post of the same here @ https://rajkumarmilan.wordpress.com/2016/03/13/washerwoman-a-paradox/

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    2. Thanks and thank you for the visit!

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